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Chapter 5 獲獎(jiǎng)祝賀

郵件速覽

From: Charlotte Lynn

To: Isabella Wallis

Subject: Congratulations on Your Winning the Prize

Dear Isabella,

Congratulations! I couldn't be so happier to hear that you have got the first prize of Young Designers Competition this year. All of our friends are proud of you for your talent in and enthusiasm for the apparel design. Even though you have not received any professional training in this field, you made even greater achievement than those who have.


Now I understand that interest is the best teacher. All the efforts and time you spent on apparel design is worthwhile. You realized your value on it and also got happiness and satisfaction from it. Those are what really matters.


I hope you can insist on your original intention in the days to come. And I wish you would create better works. Congratulations again!

Faithfully yours,

Charlotte

寄件人:夏洛特·林恩

收件人:伊莎貝拉·沃利斯

主旨:獲獎(jiǎng)祝賀

親愛(ài)的伊莎貝拉:

祝賀你!聽(tīng)說(shuō)你在今年的青年設(shè)計(jì)師設(shè)計(jì)大賽上獲得了第一名,我高興不已。我們所有朋友都為你在服裝設(shè)計(jì)上的才能和對(duì)服裝設(shè)計(jì)的熱愛(ài)感到驕傲。盡管你并沒(méi)有接受過(guò)這方面的專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)習(xí),你取得的成就卻比那些科班出身的人還要輝煌。

現(xiàn)在我明白了,興趣是最好的老師。你在服裝設(shè)計(jì)上花費(fèi)的所有精力和時(shí)間都是值得的。你在這里實(shí)現(xiàn)了自己的價(jià)值,并從中收獲了開(kāi)心與滿(mǎn)足感。這些才是最重要的。

我希望你今后可以堅(jiān)持自己的初心。也祝愿你能創(chuàng)作出更優(yōu)秀的作品。再次向你表示祝賀!

忠誠(chéng)的

夏洛特

學(xué)以致用

1. I couldn't be so happier to hear that you have got the first prize of Young Designers Competition this year.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你在今年的青年設(shè)計(jì)師設(shè)計(jì)大賽上獲得了第一名,我高興不已。

★ 解析:

句首的I couldn't be so happier to hear that..可以視為習(xí)慣用法,表示“聽(tīng)說(shuō)……我高興不已”。句中的get the first prize表示“獲得第一名”,相當(dāng)于win (the) first prize、come first in...。

★ 套用:

I couldn't be so happier to hear that you came first in the poetry competition.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你在詩(shī)歌比賽中取得了第一名,我高興不已。

I couldn't be so happier to hear that you were awarded a medal for your contribution to the company.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你因?yàn)閷?duì)公司的貢獻(xiàn)而獲得了一枚獎(jiǎng)?wù)拢腋吲d不已。

I couldn't be so happier to hear that you are in line for the Laurel Prize.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你有望得到桂冠獎(jiǎng),我高興不已。

2. I hope you can insist on your original intention in the days to come.

我希望你今后可以堅(jiān)持自己的初心。

★ 解析:

句首的I hope you can...in the days to come.可以視為習(xí)慣用法,表示“我希望你今后可以……”。其中的I hope...后可以接省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句,表示“我希望……”,相當(dāng)于I wish...、I expect...、I anticipate...。句末的in the days to come可以視為固定用法,表示“今后,將來(lái),在未來(lái)的日子里”。

★ 套用:

I hope you can achieve greater success in the days to come.

我希望你今后可以取得更大的成就。

I hope you can make greater achievements in the days to come.

我希望你今后可以取得更大的成就。

I hope you can work harder in the days to come.

我希望你今后可以更加努力地工作。

句式集錦

1. He took the palm by perseverance.他靠不屈不撓的精神獲勝。

2. He succeeded by will.他靠毅力取勝。

3. His persistence gained him victory.他的毅力使他獲得了勝利。

4. Based on the annual evaluation, the board of directors decided to give you a bonus.根據(jù)今年的績(jī)效考評(píng),董事會(huì)決定給你發(fā)一筆獎(jiǎng)金。

5. He was awarded a gold cup in acknowledgment of his achievements for the company.公司獎(jiǎng)給他一個(gè)金杯,以感謝他為公司所作出的成就。

6. The company awarded Julia for her good work.公司因?yàn)檐锢驄I工作出色獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)了她。

7. Thanks to your excellent work, our turnover this month has increased by 20%.由于你的出色表現(xiàn),我們這個(gè)月的營(yíng)業(yè)額增加了20%。

8. I was awarded the title of Advanced Worker this year.今年我獲得了“先進(jìn)工作者”的稱(chēng)號(hào)。

9. I received a reward because I made an innovation.

=I was rewarded because I made an innovation.

我因創(chuàng)新而獲獎(jiǎng)。

10. She was fearful that the prize should escape her at last.她擔(dān)心最后得不到獎(jiǎng)。

溫馨提示

★ 例文寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):

1.祝賀對(duì)方在青年設(shè)計(jì)師大獎(jiǎng)賽上奪冠,肯定對(duì)方的努力付出與成就;

2.闡明對(duì)方在服裝設(shè)計(jì)上所付出的時(shí)間與精力、所收獲的開(kāi)心與滿(mǎn)足;

3.致以衷心的祝愿,并且再次道賀。

★ E-mail的問(wèn)候語(yǔ)寫(xiě)法綜述1:

問(wèn)候語(yǔ)作為郵件的導(dǎo)語(yǔ)或是開(kāi)頭,通常是表示感謝或是說(shuō)明發(fā)送郵件的原因。

例文中的問(wèn)候語(yǔ),是直接表明主旨,向?qū)Ψ降蕾R:

Congratulations!

祝賀你!

另以商務(wù)類(lèi)的E-mail問(wèn)候語(yǔ)寫(xiě)法為例,列舉如下:

I'm writing to inquire about...

我寫(xiě)這封電子郵件,是想要詢(xún)問(wèn)……。

I am very much pleased to inform you that...

很高興告訴你……。

I am writing in reply to your doubts about...

我寫(xiě)這封電子郵件,是為了答復(fù)貴方關(guān)于……的疑問(wèn)。

We are pleased to inform you that...

很高興告知貴方……。

With great delight, I learned that you would...

很高興獲悉,您將……。

I acknowledge with thanks receipt of your E-mail dated...

您于……月……日發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件已經(jīng)收到,十分感謝。

I take the liberty of writing to you to apply for...

我冒昧寫(xiě)這封郵件給您,是想要申請(qǐng)……。

May I venture to inquire about...?

能否冒昧詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)……的詳情?

First of all, I would love to express my gratitude for...

首先,我想要謝謝您的……。

In reply to your E-mail of..., I would love to negotiate with you about further details about the...

作為對(duì)貴方……月……日的電子郵件的答復(fù),我想要和您協(xié)商有關(guān)……的詳細(xì)事宜。

It has been a pleasure learning that...

很高興獲悉……。

It gives me great pleasure to learn from your E-mail that you...

很高興從您的電子郵件中獲悉,您……。

I'm delighted to hear that you would like to...

很高興獲悉,貴方有意……。

I must apologize for not being able to reply to your kind E-mail dated...earlier.

很抱歉,未能及早回復(fù)您于……月……日發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件。

First of all, I would love to express my gratitude for your...

首先,我想要謝謝您的……。

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