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Chapter 3 晉升祝賀

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From: Sophia Grayson

To: Emily Lucas

Subject: Congratulations on Your Promotion

Dear Emily,

I am quite pleased to hear that you have been promoted as the Sales Director by the headquarters. It is an outstanding achievement in such a competitive field. Hereby I would like to offer my sincere congratulations on your promotion. You are moving up in the world.

I know very well that your have diligence and earnest attitude towards work. I also heard that you have been making full use of your spare time to improve yourself in other aspects, such as learning foreign languages and starting bodybuilding. And your competence is extremely outstanding which also could be told through your work performance. Most worthy of mention is that your quality of leadership is obvious to all. I believe that you are the perfect one to be competent at this position. We all think that you really deserve it more than anyone else.

I wish you every success in your new position as Sales Director.

Yours truly,

Sophia

寄件人:索菲亞·格雷森

收件人:艾米麗·盧卡斯

主旨:晉升祝賀

親愛(ài)的艾米麗:

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你已經(jīng)被公司總部升任為銷售總監(jiān),我很高興。這是在充滿激烈競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的領(lǐng)域里取得的杰出成就。在此,我誠(chéng)摯地恭賀你升職。你這是要平步青云了呀!


我非常了解你,你對(duì)待工作勤勤懇懇,認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)。我還聽(tīng)說(shuō)你一直利用空閑時(shí)間在其他方面提高自身,比如學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)和健身。而且你的工作能力非常突出,這可以從你的業(yè)績(jī)上看出來(lái)。最值得一提的是,你的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)才能也是大家有目共睹的。我相信,你是勝任這一職位的最佳人選。我們都認(rèn)為你比任何人都應(yīng)當(dāng)獲得該職位。


我祝愿你在銷售總監(jiān)這一新崗位上事事順利!

真誠(chéng)的

索菲亞

學(xué)以致用

1. I am quite pleased to hear that you have been promoted as the Sales Director by the headquarters.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你已經(jīng)被公司總部升任為銷售總監(jiān),我很高興。

★ 解析:

句首的I am quite pleased to hear that...可以視為習(xí)慣用法,表示“聽(tīng)說(shuō)……我很高興”。其中的be pleased to do為固定用法,表示“很高興……”;句中的be promoted as...同樣是固定用法,表示“被提升為……”。

★ 套用:

I am quite pleased to hear that you will be promoted next month.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你下個(gè)月就可以升職了,我很高興。

I am quite pleased to hear that you got promotion once again.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你再次升職,我很高興。

I am quite pleased to hear that you caught a break and got promoted.

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你交了好運(yùn),升職了,我很高興。

2. I believe that you are the perfect one to be competent at this position.

我相信,你是勝任這一職位的最佳人選。

★ 解析:

句首的I believe that you are the perfect one to be competent at...可以視為習(xí)慣用法,表示“我相信,你是勝任……的最佳人選”。其中的I believe that...可以視為習(xí)慣用法,表示“我相信……我認(rèn)為……”,相當(dāng)于I think that...。句中的be competent at...為固定用法,表示“勝任……有能力……”,相當(dāng)于be competent as...、be competent in...、be competent to do。

★ 套用:

I believe that you are the perfect one to be competent at the new position.

我相信,你是勝任這個(gè)新職位的最佳人選。

I believe that you are the perfect one to be competent at your new job.

我相信,你是勝任你的新工作的最佳人選。

I believe that you are the perfect one to be competent at the vacancy.

我相信,你是勝任這個(gè)空缺職位的最佳人選。

句式集錦

1. We've decided to promote him to the general manager.我們決定提拔他做總經(jīng)理。

2. I think he is the right person for this position.我認(rèn)為他是這一職位的合適人選。

3. We believe that he has the seniority and can do the job.我們相信他具備應(yīng)有的資歷,能把工作做好。

4. He deserves the promotion.升職是他應(yīng)得的。

5. He has the ability to work well with others.他能夠和他人一起很好地完成工作。

6. One reason for his promotion is that he is efficient in work.他升職的原因之一是他工作效率很高。

7. The reason he got the promotion is that he can work under high pressure.公司提拔他的原因是他能夠在高壓下進(jìn)行工作。

8. He will be promoted to the position of executive vice president.他將被提升為公司執(zhí)行副總裁。

9. He will be promoted to Director of Marketing because his suggestion bought multi-million dollars benefits.因?yàn)樗慕ㄗh給公司帶來(lái)了數(shù)百萬(wàn)美元的收益,所以公司決定提升他為市場(chǎng)總監(jiān)。

10. All board members agree to appoint him for manager.董事會(huì)所有成員都同意他擔(dān)任經(jīng)理一職。

溫馨提示

★ 例文寫作要點(diǎn):

1.祝賀對(duì)方晉升,肯定對(duì)方的付出與努力;

2.稱贊對(duì)方的成績(jī)與能力,以此證明晉升一事是理所應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)模?/p>

3.再次致以美好祝愿。

★ E-mail的主旨寫法綜述1:

E-mail的主旨是電子郵件的內(nèi)容概要,標(biāo)注于電子郵件的主題行,表述務(wù)必要明確完整,力求避繁就簡(jiǎn),長(zhǎng)度最好不要超過(guò)35個(gè)字母,并且要注意避免有歧義的或是語(yǔ)意含糊的主旨。通常情況下,主旨多是用“(冠詞+)形容詞/名詞+名詞”“(冠詞+)名詞+介詞+名詞”“形容詞+介詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)。

例文中的主旨即為“名詞+介詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu):

Subject: Congratulations on Your Promotion

主旨:晉升祝賀

另以商務(wù)類的E-mail主旨寫法為例,列舉如下:

1.“名詞+介詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu):

Subject: Arrangements for Your Stay in London

主旨:您在倫敦停留期間的安排

Subject: Cancellation of Our Order No. 00156

主旨:取消00156號(hào)訂單

Subject: Changes to the Business Hours

主旨:營(yíng)業(yè)時(shí)間變更

Subject: Errors in Your Invoice No. 00194

主旨:00194號(hào)發(fā)票有誤

Subject: Invoice with Documents Attached

主旨:附有憑證的發(fā)貨單

Subject: Penalty for Late Payment of Bills

主旨:對(duì)逾期付款的處罰

Subject: Apology for the Defective Goods

主旨:抱歉,有殘次貨品

Subject: Quotation for the Laptop Computer

主旨:手提電腦的報(bào)價(jià)

Subject: Confirmation of Your Hotel Reservation

主旨:確認(rèn)您的酒店預(yù)訂

2.“冠詞+名詞+介詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu):

Subject: A Word of Advice on the Counter-offer

主旨:對(duì)于還盤的建議

Subject: A Claim for Damages

主旨:索賠損失

Subject: The Strike by Bus Drivers for Higher Pay

主旨:公交車司機(jī)為求加薪而罷工

3.“冠詞+名詞/形容詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu):

Subject: The Detailed Shipment Schedule

主旨:詳細(xì)的貨運(yùn)時(shí)間表

Subject: The Staff Meeting Next Monday

主旨:下周一的全體員工會(huì)議

4.“名詞+介詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu):

Subject: Your Business Trip to Paris

主旨:您去往巴黎的商務(wù)旅行

5.“形容詞+介詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu):

Subject: Sorry for the Delayed Shipment

主旨:抱歉,發(fā)貨延誤

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