- 英文E-mail應用大全:看模板學寫郵件,看這本夠了
- 李文昊
- 4字
- 2020-05-28 18:15:49
Part 2 祝賀
Chapter 1 生日祝賀
郵件速覽
From: Emma Garcia
To: Olivia Harris
Subject: Congratulations on Your Birthday
Dear Olivia,
Your E-mail of yesterday afternoon has given me great delight.
I am sure that you don't want to be reminded that you are a year older today. Anyway, Today is a big day and I should say “Happy Birthday” to you! Time runs really fast. You are 23 years old now. And our friendship has lasted for 12 years. I can still remember the scene when we celebrated your 11 years old birthday with our primary school classmates in the summer camp. Now we all have grown up and have our own career.
What I want to say is that your existence in my life is really a wonderful thing. Please accept my sincere blessing for this important occasion today. As your close friend, I do wish you always be happy and healthy. And I hope that our friendship will last forever and we can slowly grow old together.
Best wishes to your and your family.
Yours faithfully,
Emma
寄件人:艾瑪·加西亞
收件人:奧利維亞·哈里斯
主旨:生日祝賀
親愛的奧利維亞:
你昨日下午發來的電子郵件讓我極為欣喜。
我確定你并不想要被人提醒說自己又長了一歲。不管怎么說,今天都是一個重要的日子,我要祝你生日快樂。時間過得真快啊!你現在都23歲了。我們之間的友誼已經有12年之久。我依然記得在夏令營和我們的小學同學一起為你慶祝11歲生日的情景?,F在我們都已經長大成人,并擁有了自己的事業。
我想說的是,我的生命中有你的存在是一件非常美妙的事。在今天這一重要時刻,請收下我最誠摯的祝福。作為你的好友,我祝愿你永遠開心、健康。我也希望我們的友誼長存,我們能一起慢慢變老。
向你和家人致以最美好的祝福。
忠誠的
艾瑪
學以致用
1. I can still remember the scene when we celebrated your 11 years old birthday with our primary school classmates in the summer camp.
我依然記得在夏令營和我們的小學同學一起為你慶祝11歲生日的情景。
★ 解析:
I can still remember the scene when we...可以視為習慣用法,表示“我依然記得……的情景”。句中的the scene后接when引導的定語從句,而primary school、summer camp可以視為固定用法,分別表示“小學”“夏令營”。
★ 套用:
I can still remember the scene when we celebrated your 15th birthday.
我依然記得我們慶祝你15歲生日時的情景。
I can still remember the scene when we prepared birthday presents for Jessica.
我依然記得我們為杰西卡準備生日禮物時的情景。
I can still remember the scene when we cooked the birthday cake for Henry.
我依然記得我們為亨利制作生日蛋糕時的情景。
2. What I want to say is that your existence in my life is really a wonderful thing.
我想說的是,我的生命中有你的存在是一件非常美妙的事。
★ 解析:
What I want to say is that...可以視為習慣用法,表示“我想說的是……”,相當于I want to say that...。句首的主語是what I want to say, is后接引導詞that連接的表語從句。
★ 套用:
What I want to say is that I am grateful to you for your nice birthday present.
我想說的是,我很感激你送來的漂亮的生日禮物。
What I want to say is that I am thankful to you for attending my birthday party.
我想說的是,我很感激你來參加我的生日聚會。
What I want to say is that I am grateful for the invitation to your birthday party.
我想說的是,我很感激你邀請我參加你的生日聚會。
句式集錦
1. I am thinking what birthday gift to give to her.我正在想送什么生日禮物給她。
2. This was given to me as a birthday gift.這是給我的生日禮物。
3. She has received lots of birthday gifts.她收到了許多生日禮物。
4. His favorite birthday present is a model car.他最喜歡的生日禮物是一輛汽車模型。
5. Thanks for your generous gift.感謝你豐厚的禮物。
6. This is the best present I ever received.這是我所收到的最好的禮物。
7. Thank you for the pleasure your gift brought.感謝你的禮品給我們帶來的歡愉。
8. The table is heaped with presents.桌上放滿了禮物。
9. She selected a birthday gift for her father.她為父親挑選了生日禮物。
10. I am preparing a birthday party for Melissa.我正在為梅麗莎準備一個生日聚會。
溫馨提示
★ 例文寫作要點:
1.感謝對方昨日發來的郵件,致以衷心的生日祝福,并且回憶往昔的真摯友情;
2.鄭重致以美好的生日祝賀與愿景;
3.結尾的問候語簡單明快,再次致以祝福。
★ E-mail的寫作原則綜述4:
原則4:Clarity 清楚
所謂清晰,是指書寫英文E-mail時,要用準確、簡明的詞匯和句式結構,力求表述明確,層次清楚,避免模糊不清的語義。
如例文中的:
Your E-mail of yesterday afternoon has given me great delight.
你昨日下午發來的電子郵件讓我極為欣喜?!?/p>
Your E-mail has given me great delight.
你發來的電子郵件讓我極為欣喜。×(your E-mail語義不明)
再如:
You could get 15% discounts if you buy 50 tons of the item or even more.
如果購買50噸或是更多的此類產品,可以得到15%的折扣?!?/p>
You could get discounts if you buy the products in bulk.
如果大量購買,可以得到折扣?!粒╠iscounts、in bulk語義不明)