Part I Writing

Upon graduation, every college student is facing such a difficult problem as what to do next.Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue. For some, they hold that there is no better way to get a decent job than working in a state-owned business, which would supposedly guarantee their life after retirement.For others, they believe a joint venture outweighs the former as it may provide a brighter future for employees. For me, I would like to work in a joint venture.

My reasons are as follows. First, to work in a joint venture means to stay in a metropolis after graduation, where there are plenty of opportunities and I can pursue my personal goals.Second, I prefer a speedy pace of working and the rapid personal development and growth, which can most probably be achieved in a joint venture.Third, I want to finance myself soon after graduation, so a high-paying job in a joint venture is what I expect.

In short, to work in a joint venture is what I choose for my career.

畢業(yè)之際，每一位大學(xué)生都面臨著一個(gè)難題，那就是接下來要做什么。在這個(gè)問題上，學(xué)生們的觀點(diǎn)有著很大的差異。對于有些學(xué)生來說，他們認(rèn)為在國企找份體面的工作是最好的，據(jù)稱這會使他們退休后的生活得到保障。而其他學(xué)生則認(rèn)為，合資企業(yè)會給就業(yè)者提供更加光明的前途，因此勝過前者。對我自己來說，我想進(jìn)入合資企業(yè)工作。

我的原因如下。第一，在合資企業(yè)工作意味著畢業(yè)后留在大城市，那里有很多機(jī)會，我還能追求個(gè)人目標(biāo)。第二，我更喜歡快節(jié)奏的工作，以及個(gè)人的快速發(fā)展和提升，而這些在合資企業(yè)才最有可能實(shí)現(xiàn)。第三，我想在畢業(yè)之后即能自力更生，因此一份合資企業(yè)的高薪工作正是我所期盼的。

總之，在合資企業(yè)工作就是我的職業(yè)選擇。

要點(diǎn)用法

句法點(diǎn)評

1.Upon graduation, every college student is facing such a difficult problem as what to do next.

本句主干結(jié)構(gòu)為every college student is facing… problem。在such a difficult problem as…中，as引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)定語從句，修飾先行詞problem。

2.For some, they hold that there is no better way… than working… after retirement.

本句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，主語是they, 謂語動詞是hold, 賓語從句是there be句型。在這個(gè)賓語從句中含有一個(gè)比較結(jié)構(gòu)：no better way… than…相當(dāng)于最高級is the best way…；另外，句中which引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾business。

3.First, to work in a joint venture means to stay in a metropolis…，where… personal goals.

本句中不定式短語to work in a joint venture是句子的主語，不定式短語to stay in a metropolis…是句子的賓語；在賓語中包含一個(gè)where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。

4.Third, I want to finance myself…，so a high-paying job in a joint venture is what I expect.

so連接兩個(gè)表示因果關(guān)系的并列句，后一個(gè)分句中包含一個(gè)what引導(dǎo)的表語從句。