As science and technology advance,an increasing number of people begin to take advantage of digital devices and the Internet to take courses and acquire knowledge.The boom of e-learning seems to be an inevitable trend that is bound to make a huge impact on people's learning.
While some think e-learning may hinder interpersonal communication and interaction,thus leading to separation and a ruin of the nature of study,others hold that e-learning can facilitate our learning in many aspects.There is no doubt that e-learning greatly promotes learning efficiency,and breaks the restrictions in terms of time,places and subjects,to some extent.Updated knowledge will spread rapidly,enabling learners to keep pace with the time,especially for those in remote areas.
From my point of view,interaction between teachers and learners at school is necessary and irreplaceable and the traditional face-to-face studying process plays a significant role.It is advisable that we should combine e-learning with attending school,and it is high time that we placed great emphasis on this issue as e-learning is becoming more and more pervasive.
1.As science and technology advance,an increasing number of people begin to take advantage of digital devices and the Internet to take courses and acquire knowledge.
用一個較長的句子開篇,引出在線學習這一主題。主從復合句的使用可為文章增色。
2.The boom of e-learning seems to be an inevitable trend that is bound to make a huge impact on people's learning.
3.While some think e-learning may hinder interpersonal communication and interaction,thus leading to separation and a ruin of the nature of study,others hold that e-learning can facilitate our learning in many aspects.
4.There is no doubt that e-learning greatly promotes learning efficiency,and breaks the restrictions in terms of time,places and subjects,to some extent.
進一步論述在線學習的優勢和影響。同位語從句的使用使全文句式表達富有變化。
5.From my point of view,interaction between teachers and learners at school is necessary and irreplaceable and the traditional face-to-face studying process plays a significant role.
末段首句闡明作者的觀點,指出傳統課堂的教育方式無可替代。并列句的使用使觀點表達明晰、具體。
6.It is advisable that we should combine e-learning with attending school,and it is high time that we placed great emphasis on this issue as e-learning is becoming more and more pervasive.