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振洋
2024-11-10 01:53:50
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好多作者都磨蹭磨蹭的,最后都爛尾了,你寫的太快邏輯緊密,引起同行眾怒了,不過也要給你一個好評我又不是作者,我就是個讀者
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書友20230401315_BA
2024-11-13 03:16:17
作者你檢查一下身體
如果檢查一下身體還是這個問題建議你找道士
書友2023061086_ba
2024-11-03 12:43:15
什么笨蛋 被鴻運忽悠入劫 看不了再見
詹成瑤
2025-04-30 17:54:32
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(聽)周老四
2024-11-03 03:19:57
聽了十章來評論
這本書的劇情寫的不錯,有自己的思路和一些想法。
有兩個想法想說:一:主角是穿越者,怎么隨隨便便就被鴻鈞pua了?鴻鈞跟你說的那些,你不會自己思考?就聽著鴻鈞說的,然后自己也自我洗腦的去信了鴻鈞的話?鴻鈞是個好人的話,那其他幾個幫它打羅睺的能死這么簡單?鴻鈞說你是羅睺道的阻礙,那那幾個幫鴻鈞的幾個都是鴻鈞道的阻礙唄?
二:既然這本書書名叫冥河化輪回?。ㄎ揖湍闷毡榈暮榛膭∏閬砀爬?,可能你這本書想法不一樣,因為你寫的主角應該是修大道法則那路子,我個人認為是三清那些都是修天道法則?。┠敲茨憔筒粦搯为毴ノ帐裁瓷窔?,死氣!你要化輪回,那就應該把煞氣/死氣/生氣等等任何讓生靈成禍的東西都融合,然后去化解成純潔的本源!
輪回是什么?在所有人認知是不是去掉所有生前一切事和物!然后轉世投胎!那么你這本書都說要化輪回了!那么你開始修的就應該是吸收一切負面的本源去成為你以后的道(輪回)
書友20240510256_DE
2024-12-06 14:47:21
同為四大鴻蒙至寶 等級一樣 為什么隨隨便便鴻鈞就能算到主角 作者設定有問題

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