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看不到大愛在哪里 一個大男人 在玩什么 欲擒故縱感覺 是島國或者棒子國小子 穿越過去 的好惡心的男主

真就是芝士雪豹唄，預言家嗎？寫的好好的，咋就又爛了？

要真想好好寫，這個劇情就得400章往上。我提供一個思路有能力的可以去寫，就是魔尊所謂的穿越是存在的但不是現(xiàn)在，而是魔尊一開始就是穿越者應為被此世界蒙蔽了宿慧，所以在命運長河里大夢一場，看到的以為是游戲?qū)崉t是此界天道編制的未來，而主角本心不壞卻遇上了悲慘童年和無法拯救的青梅蓉兒，導致徹底入魔扭曲了，有了后面的變態(tài)虐待徒弟，但也沒想殺她們，但于天道命運對外來者的惡意，而被徒弟背叛后徹底喪失對世界的信任，而后是現(xiàn)在的劇情，所謂的穿越也不過是他穿越而來的外維力量對此界的最后反抗，干擾了天道，而所謂的系統(tǒng)就是天道的惡意組成的，為的就是讓主角相信這個未來，從而真正修正他，讓他成為系統(tǒng)打工仔，去霍霍這些女主角，讓他沉淪于美好的瑟瑟中，不斷PUA和傷害女主們，直到最后再把真正的記憶還給他，所謂的女主對他的傷害和背叛本來就是子虛烏有的存在，讓此世界的他崩潰的同時，讓他潛移默化的肯定了天道的固有命運，剝奪他所有的穿越之力。男主于迷茫悔恨中高呼：我記不清啊，我真的分不清啊！然后徹底成為反派魔尊自暴自棄，暴力遣散了所有徒弟傷害了她們奪取了他們的體質(zhì)要于天道一戰(zhàn)，而天道召集所有氣運之子與之對抗，在眾叛親離的鏖戰(zhàn)中，蓉兒還是決定回到男主身邊，還是忘不了這個師兄，而再一番斗爭后男主達到無上之境界，狂徒一切氣運之子，把背叛他的曾愛過恨過的徒弟，盆友，敵人全部犧牲的犧牲，獻祭的獻祭，成為萬人畏懼的魔尊，但當他回頭時發(fā)現(xiàn)蓉兒已經(jīng)遍體凌傷殘破不堪，仁然拼命追逐者他，叫著：師兄，夠了。通過一段虐心的努力喚回他的理智的時候，他只覺時間蒼蒼世泰閻良，蓉兒終于跟不上他逆天閥上的腳步倒下了，所有的功夫和藥都難以將他心愛的蓉兒恢復到，當年初見的美好。無奈為了挽回蓉兒和徒弟們，他無法面對自己，十分后悔自己的貪婪，怨恨天道的無情，獨自用逆天之法與天道博弈，終于找到了逆轉(zhuǎn)時空的辦法去拯救一切遺憾，但代價是他要永遠的立于世界之上與天道對弈，無法觸碰他心愛的蓉兒，不過只要看到她普通卻快樂的活著就足夠了。而這個結(jié)果也正是天道想要的結(jié)果之一，把異數(shù)困在天外天。