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笙歌醉夢(mèng)蕭
2020-03-29 16:26:06
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系統(tǒng)保不保留都可以吧,如果保留盡量歡樂(lè),人性化一點(diǎn),也別太無(wú)敵。不保留的話也可以,適當(dāng)給小雪子點(diǎn)機(jī)緣,搶唐三的也可以。希望保留原著中人物們的性格,你也不用寫(xiě)的太復(fù)雜,畢竟這是本同人小說(shuō)。另外雙雪cp以后的走勢(shì)要想好,畢竟還有比比東和老千。加油 [表情]

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  • 天帝云天
    好的,謝謝您的指導(dǎo)和建議,臣拜謝!
    2樓 2020-03-29 16:39:42
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